Finding Deep Meanings: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

Snow on pink fruit tree blossoms in April -- what does it mean?

Snow on plum blossoms/
in April means something. I’m/
too tired to know what.
OR
Snow on fruit blossoms/
in Spring means something, but I’m/
too tired to know what.

Who Attended The Better Class? Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

Foggy night view of the Salt Lake City LDS Temple

He went to a class/
to be taught. She attended/
the Temple and learned.

Train Tunnel Tuba: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

Front Runner Train Station tunnel, 10:33 p.m. Tuesday

Flatulating deep/
within a train tunnel sounds/
like a tuba note.
OR
Flatulating in/
a train tunnel sounds like a/
long, deep tuba note.

Natural Wall Art: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

I stuck a maple/
leaf so it protruded from/
a concrete wall. Art?
OR
Does sticking a leaf/
so it protrudes from a wall/
of concrete make art?

Receiving Inspiration By The Spirit: Revolutionary ConTEXTing Haiku

If I don’t receive/
any inspiration, *whose/
fault will that then be?
OR
*who’s/
then accountable?

Shuffle Off To Draper At The Train Station: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

I wonder how oft/
she danced with herself, that old/
step-ball-change soft shoe.

New Views Come From Extending Your Path: Revolutionary ImproVerse Rhyming Quatrain

You must walk past/
where you’re supposed to go/
to see visions/
you’ve never viewed before

Changing My Perspective: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku

Instead of looking/
for fault in others, I should/
find the great in all.

Regifting: Revolutionary ConTEXTing Haiku

The best gifts I can/
give are when I can pass on/
what’s been given me.

He Loves Us Most: Revolutionary ConTEXTing Haiku

We may pray for things/
we don’t need, but He answers/
because He loves us.

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