When I am with her,
all other people but the
Savior disappear.
Tag Archives: poet David Kuhns
I Love To See The Temple – Part 2: Revolutionary Improv Primary Song Redo
I love to see the Temple./
I’m going back some day./
I used to love to go there/
but then I lost my way./
But the Temple is a holy place/
that I will not defile./
I’ll go back there when I am clean,/
*though it may take a while!
OR
*it’s taken quite a while!
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If you want to hear me sing the song (in improv format) as it happened, go to this link on YouTube
How Real Men Show Love: Romantic IMprov Haiku
A man who bakes his/
love cookies to adorn her/
tiara, shows love.
Be In Control Of Your Own OH! Romantic ImproVerse Rhyming Haiku
She was in control/
of her own OH! She knew when/
to come, when to go.
OR
Be in control of/
your life’s own OH! Know when to/
come and when to go.
Dancing Red Shoes: Romantic ConTEXTing Haiku
If she’d have answered/
me, I would have taken her/
red shoes out dancing.
I Have Better Things To Do: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
I stood in the marsh,/
heard a redwinged blackbird, and/
cut down my TV.
Or
… and/
watched much less TV.
Will It Make A Difference? Romantic ConTEXTing Haiku
Many lines converged/
in a museum. I took/
the one less trodden.
OR
the one less walked on.
(with apologies to Robert Frost and the woman in the striped skirt.)
She Has No Idea: Romantic ConTEXTing Haiku
She said I was the/
most naughty she’d ever heard./
I’ve not yet started!
Valentine's Day Vision: Romantic ConTEXTing Haiku
I see a vision/
I want to tell her, but I/
fear how she’ll judge me.
Surprise Valentine: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
My best Valentine/
came from a married woman/
who gave me closure.