Maybe the geese, the/
martins and the sunset, all/
combined, said congrats.
OR
Maybe the martins,/
geese and sunset all combined/
to wish me congrats.
Here’s the Geese Flight at Sunset video to go with it
Tag Archives: haiku
A Better Airshow (With Sunset) : Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
Sorry, Oshkosh! This/
evening’s airshow at the lake/
was free (and better!)
(View the long video version here, including 1/2 and 1/4 speed video)
Free Sunset Airshow: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
This evening I took/
the chance to see birds’ awesome/
free sunset airshow.
(View the short version here on YouTube)
Must I Wait For Snow? Romantic IMprov Haiku
Must I wait ’til it/
snows in Chattanooga to/
kiss someone like you?
Bridget Jones’ Diary Snow Kiss
Curse You, Facebook! Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
I’m addicted to/
share pics and words with folks who/
don’t care, and see theirs.
Dancing With Myself Dislike: Romantic Blogging Haiku Lament
Going to concerts/
solo reminds me how much/
I hate loneliness.
Firefly Fireworks Substitute: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
I was going to/
watch fireworks, then decided/
to watch fireflies dance.
OR
I was gonna watch/
fireworks fly, then decided/
to watch fireflies work.
Or Am I Just, At Last, Practical? Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
Have I become too/
old, at last, to want to go/
out dancing weekends?