And we walked through the/
garden, and he looked down. As/
we left, he gazed up.
OR
As we walked through the/
garden, he looked down. As we/
left, he gazed upward.
Tag Archives: haiku
Creating Art In A Sculpture Garden: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
In the stonecutter’s/
art garden, I tried to add/
my simple off’ring.
Deep Insights From A Surprise Source: 2 Revolutionary ImproVerse Haikus
The ditzy blonde went/
way deep and saw a meaning/
beyond my vision.
AND
“Even in the midst.
of spirituality,/
the world still exists.”
Mixed Messages: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
Stones cut from the face/
of the mountain, spears and plows,/
and colored warnings.
Why I Don't Lie Any More: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
As a master of/
deception, I can see it/
and know: Lying’s bad.
Or
… I can see lies. /
They’re bad. Thus, I stopped.
My Empty Bowl Fills: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
Maybe my empty/
potter’s bowl will help warm and/
fill empty stomachs.
A Surprise Friday Evening: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
Good art. Good music./
Good weather. Good vibe. Good cause./
It gets no gooder.
Here I Go Again: Revolutionary Blogging Haiku
I again stand on/
the verge of being told I’m/
not appropriate.
The Writer's Job: Revolutionary ImproVerse Rhyming Haiku
We are world changers,/
perspective rearrangers,/
helping others see.
Double The Heat: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
There’s nothing like a/
good root beer burp after hot /
Buffalo Wild Wings.