She wants a long talk./
Is a night’s worth of touching/
feet too much to ask?
Category Archives: Revolutionary ImproVerse Poetry
Dancing With Fireflies: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
There was no bright red/
sunset to amaze us so/
fireflies danced for us.
OR
There was no bright red/
sunset to amaze us so/
we danced with fireflies.
Self-Criticism And Future Opportunities: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
It’s not what you did/
or didn’t do, but what you/
can and still will do.
Tales Of Rescue (‘Cuz That’s What Dad’s Do) : Revolutionary ImproVerse Poem
My sister told the tale/
of being under sail/
years before.
She capsized,/
but she knew,/
and was not surprised/
with how quickly from the shore/
our Father flew/
to her rescue.
While I was glad/
that she was loved by our Dad,/
I knew/
Between him and me/
there would never be/
such sharing/
or attentive caring.
Yesterday, decades hence,/
my cousin and I went/
on a day sail,
and our mast ripped apart and failed.
So, we drifted, demasted,
but my anxiousness only lasted/
a moment or two/
before I knew/
that once more/
my Dad had watched from shore/
and quickly, in his boat without crew,
was coming to his child’s rescue.
Because that’s what Dads do.
Cleaner Than Nothing: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
Bird poop. Algae. Scum./
Carp slime. I don’t care. I still/
bathe in lake water.
Gone Fishin’: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
When the going gets/
tough in my life, I cast a/
lure in the water.