When you hold out hope/
to save your daughter’s life, you/
still druck die Daumen.
Or
When you hold onto/
hope to save your daughter’s life,
you druck die Daumen.
Category Archives: Revolutionary ImproVerse Poetry
Facebook Request Denied: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku Lament
She tried to friend me/
with her husband. Just stick a/
hot stake through my heart.
Raindrops On Plum Blossoms: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
Like pink crystals the/
drops hang: Mem’ries of Winter,/
harbingers of Spring.
My Daughter's Last Meal: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
I never worried/
that french fries at Red Robin/
would be her last meal.
Who's Abandoned? Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
While she is feeling/
abandoned, her parents are/
with her. So she’s not.
AND
Although she feels she’s/
abandoned, her parents are/
there. That’s what we do
Pretty Great Love: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
A little greater/
love hath no dad than this: to/
clean thorns for his kids.
What Repentance Feels Like: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
Repentance feels like:/
Fin’lly doing all the hard/
things you should have done.
Good Mountain Morning: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
On a day that will/
Change my life for good, at least/
The mountain is out.
Milwaukee Deutsch Legacy: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
How’djah cutcha?/
Burnyah? What car we takin?/
Da truck? Dialect.
Flower Art: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
Some create art from/
flowers. He finds wild flowers/
and captures their art.