With her white hat, the/
woman in bright red was a/
piece of art as well.
OR
The woman in bright /
red, with her white hat, was a/
piece of art as well.
Category Archives: Revolutionary ImproVerse Poetry
I Wish The Gardens Were Open: Revolutionary ImproVerse Rhyming Haiku
Though the gardens are/
closed, inspiration and light/
still blossoms and glows.
OR
Though the gardens are/
closed, the inspiration and/
the light still blossoms.
Our Humanhood Of Common Good: Revolutionary ImproVerse Rhyming Haiku
When we as artists/
and writers meet, we admire,/
uplift, and inspire.
You Make Me Weep: Revolutionary ImproVerse Free Verse
How would it be/
to be/
an artist who makes/
people weep/
with the beauty/
you create?
Rhetorical Question Monday, No Tuesday! In The Hospital: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
What day is today?/
Is it worth losing a day/
to add years to life?
Drugged At The Hospital, Morning: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
It’s so much better/
getting morning hard when the/
catheter is out.
Breathe Deep and Hold: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
At Jah hospital,/
Brand-new experiences./
Duuuuuuuude! I did inhale!
I’m Good With Babies: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
My hospital room’s/
next to the nurs’ry. It’s not/
fair. Can I hold them?
Strawberry Shake And A Hat Out Of Anything: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
The next best part of/
a hospital stay is lots/
of good food and hats.
Hospital Socks: Revolutionary ImproVerse Haiku
The best part about/
hospitals is that I get/
a new pair of socks.