When I ask you to/
ride the roller coaster, just/
tell me what you want.
Category Archives: Revolutionary IMprov Poetry
Learning To Play: Revolutionary IMprov Haiku
“Do you want to play?”/
“I don’t know how.” “Me neither.”/
So then they both did.
OR
“Wanna play?” he asked./
“I don’t know how.” “Me neither.”/
So then they both learned.
Stop Looking There! Revolutionary IMprov Haiku
Someone will brighten/
your life when you stop looking/
into the bright sun.
New Shoes Muse Blues: Revolutionary Rhyming IMprov Haiku
I need the chance to/
view what I can do with a/
new muse in those shoes!
OR
Give me a chance to/
view what poetry can do/
to a new shoes muse!
Geese Call Me Home: Revolutionary IMprov Haiku
Wild geese fly over/
my mid-mountain lake, calling/
me back to my home.
OR
calling /
back my memories.
Blonde-Cream-Black Photo:Revolutionary IMprov Haiku
She’s like watching a/
radiant sunset. You can’t/
take your eyes off her.
What Others Think: Revolutionary IMprov Haiku
What others think is/
not vital. Learn what works for/
you and God. Do that*.
OR
Have joy.
Recalling Her Thoughtful Night Gaze: Revolutionary IMprov Haiku
Facebook phone showed just/
her hair, face, neck: Enough to/
recall her night* gaze.
OR
*thought
Fear Falling Failing: Revolutionary IMprov Rhyming Haiku
To stand on cliffs, gaze/
at the abyss, fear falling /
is foolish failing.
OR
Stand on cliffs! Gaze at/
the abyss! To fear falling /
is foolish failing.
Affectation Effect: Revolutionary IMprov Limerick
Her affectation/
of pronounciation/
effected me/
negatively./
It’s linguistic frustration.