It’s sad my daughter’s/
validation must come from/
others, not the One.
Category Archives: Revolutionary IMprov Poetry
Another Saturday Night (And I’m Here On Facebook) : Romantic IMprov Song Cover
Sung to the tune of “Another Saturday Night” by Sam Cooke, also sung by Cat Stevens and others
Another Saturday night/
and I’m stuck on Facebook!/
I forgot an event/
(but I hadn’t paid).
How I wish that I’d gone out hiking*!
I’m in an awful way!
It’s hard on a fella/
when he’s been too long around./
I’ve dated all the honeys/
and all they want is money./
I’m gonna have to blow this town.
(Chorus)
*dancing
A brother once told me/
he knew a sister who was so fine./
Instead of seeing inner beauty,/
she wants to date a cutey/
with his body that is so divine.
Ohhhh (Chorus)
*eating
I stumbled and I fell bad;/
consumed with worldly lusts./
I truly have repented,/
but I may as well be dead/
because they feel no trust.
OOOhh (Chorus)
*to anything!
Valentine’s Day Ancestry Bouquet: Revolutionary IMprov Sonnet

I thought I’d make a bouquet
showing our German ancestry
as they crossed the sea.
They departed from Bremen
to seek a new land’s safe haven
on the Sovereign Ship Leipzig:
a two funnel/two mast rig.
In “stearage” the small family came,
Just five with misspelled Geerdts name;
One suitcase each as they came ashore
under Fort McHenry’s watch in Baltimore.
With little more than their love, hope and trust
they paved the way. Happy Valentine’s to us!
Long Song Short To K: Revolutionary IMprov Haiku
Tho she doesn’t like/
haiku, she might enjoy this,/
knowing who it’s for.
Are Compliments Kind If True? Revolutionary IMprov Haiku
Is a compliment/
kind if it is true? Do we/
speak nice when honest?
Don’t Care Facebook Zero: Revolutionary IMprov Haiku
It’s that morning when/
nobody contacts you on/
Facebook: You don’t care!
What I’m Museum Missing: Revolutionary IMprov Haiku
You know I don’t feel/
well when there’s free museums/
and food, but I’m home.
Finding Again: Romantic IMprov Haiku
I again began/
to find stars in her eyes and/
the muse of her smile.