Dredyl top spinning.
Bent turnip or phallic root,
Twisting as Goys do
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Monthly Archives: August 2009
The Wine of the Proletariat: A Revolutionary IMprov Poem
She leaned back
having dined,
and whined
the wine
of the Proletariat.
“Clients!” said she
(somewhat mystically):
Can’t live with ’em;
Can’t pay the mortgage without ’em!”
“Amen!”
murmured her friends
as they again
laughed
and quaffed
the wine
of the Proletariat.
Reading Prose in a Mirror: Revolutionary Poetry
Reading prose in a mirror
is like reading mine, only clearer.
You’re a much tighter
writer.
I recognize everything you say, in me,
yet would have said it differently.
But I like the way
you articulate
what you have to say:
It’s great!
(Ok. That was fun.
Now I’m done.)
Thoughts On A Sunday Charity Lesson: A Revolutionary ConTEXTing Poem
Our lesson is on charity./
2 visit the sick, poor, lonely./
It’s something I try 2 do./
2 ask ‘How r u?’/
But for 3 years I’ve been lonely./
Y does no one love me?
The Muse to a Poet, You: A Sonnet Romantic or Revolutionary
A long look at a while
back, made me smile,
and wonder, again
if another contact would offend.
I suppose there are poets
aplenty, but I don’t know it,
nor know any who are published, I guess,
and have a career they call a success.
Curious about what you think in your mind;
the types of motivation and inspiration you find.
I still want to discuss the poetry you write;
the thoughts that have you reaching for a pen at night.
And now my curious sonnet is through;
and I shall, hopefully, again hear from you.
In Memory of a Sunset Silloette: Romantic Sonnet
The memory photo enchants
like the setting suns rays
on the waves
as they, lapping, dance.
And I sigh,
and smile, and watch,
enthralled, mezzmerized,
wanting to touch,
Yet, recognizing that out-reaching,
can often break the trance
of the waves lapping, crashing, beaching,
I quietly watch them dance,
until, at last, reach out to you I must,
and hope your response is kind, gentle, and just.
Erotic Art Anger: A Revolutionary ConTEXTing Poem
Why is there/
erotic art anger?/
Every participant/
I’ve yet met/
has some gripe, rant/
or grievance to vent./
Erotic joy lives in their works./
So y are they jerks?
An End Without Me: A Romantic ConTEXTing Poem
I thought we’d always care./
I thought we’d always share/
stuff/
and being stuffed./
That wasn’t enough./
You’ve turned a bend/
toward an end/
I didn’t see,/
without me
Thinking about my Profile: A Romantic Poem
You checked my smile
and style
by reading my profile.
The words I write
might
have kept you there awhile.
And I hoped, when you were through,
you’d have been smiling, too.
Beat By Cougar Bait: A Romantic ConTEXTing Poem
I got beat by Cougar bait./
Who can blame her?/
She won’t wait!/
36, 34, 35:/
No kids has he./
Still very alive,/
unlike me./
Sad poetry./
2 old, 2 late/
2b Cougar bait